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Would you let me know if you think this is close to professional (able to be published) writing? 1. yes 2, no 3. don’t care and any comments would be greatly appreciated_ Alma:I ask a girl for her pbone number and she gave it too me but when I ask her on a date she says [...]
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Danyel:
I still try to do social things but I just don't have many friends anymore.
(31 December 2018)

Danyel:
I still go out to bars and see live music and a game on tv.
(31 December 2018)

Toshia:
Why doesn't she answer to my phone calls or to my messages? How can I have her back?
(31 December 2018)

Toshia:
I feel ashamed for having a seizure in front of her.
(31 December 2018)

Toshia:
I even went to her house, but no one opened the door.
(31 December 2018)

Toshia:
If she leaves me, I'll kill myself.
(31 December 2018)

Toshia:
I called my girlfriend a thousand times and I texed her, but she hasn't responded to me yet.
(31 December 2018)

Toshia:
A nurse told me that she left me just after making sure that I was going to be okay.
(31 December 2018)

Toshia:
I had a terrible seizure that night and I fell unconscious.
(31 December 2018)

Toshia:
She didn't know that I'm suffering from epilepsy.
(31 December 2018)